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*pWp*CL@n* Forums » Community Forum » Artist's Corner » Writer's Haven » Her

Her

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1Her Empty Her Wed Dec 17, 2008 8:26 pm

tool

tool
Retired
Retired

Her

I wish she'd come
Come back home
Without doubt
She carried me
Carried me far
Lifted my head
Breathed my words
Her silence strikes
The deepest soul
This first time
This last stand
I walk alone
I wish she'd come
Come back home
Her voice trails
Like a memory
Only to be found
In a picture frame
I wish she'd come
Come back to me
She carried me
Carried me far
I wish she'd wish
For me to come
For me to love
I wish she'd wish
For me to hold
To tell her all
I love her still

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2Her Empty Re: Her Thu Jan 01, 2009 5:01 am

FRoG

FRoG
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i like the structure of this poem, each line is short, almost like breathing fast, nice flow to the words and good job tool!

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3Her Empty Re: Her Thu Jan 01, 2009 1:21 pm

boricua

boricua
Im here fairly often!

that was deep. and verrry well done tool

4Her Empty Re: Her Fri Jan 02, 2009 2:08 am

tool

tool
Retired
Retired

thank you guys Smile

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