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A clouded love

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Squ!rrel
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1A clouded love Empty A clouded love Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:18 am

aspirin

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I Just got here!

Most of the feelings i now have are in this poem, but i havent lost hope., i can't.


Two months ago I would’ve never thought,
My feelings for you -
Could leave me in a knot.
My stomach hurts,
My head aches,
I’m starting to fear
My heart will break.

My feelings were so crystal clear,
But I lost control of the wheel,
And let you steer.
Did you deceive me,
Or was I wrong,
How could this happen,
I used to be so strong.

Days pass by and still no advance,
In what appeared at first,
An endless romance.
It started as a dream,
A dream of you,
It’s just too bad,
It only almost came true.

Now I lay my chin upon my chest,
And search for everything within,

But I know it’s not the end,
For this love you wouldn’t let begin.



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2A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:30 am

maX!ma

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Crying or Very sad i hate how poems are true

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3A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:43 am

boricua

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Im here fairly often!

maX!ma wrote:Crying or Very sad i hate how poems are true

Crying or Very sad *sniff* agreed *sniff*

4A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:00 pm

Squ!rrel

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I'm here way too much!

it's just the sad truth that love is unpredictable!!!

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5A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Sun Jan 04, 2009 3:25 pm

/Cynthia.vM'

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I Just got here!

:s Amazing and true from the heart....

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6A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Sun Jan 04, 2009 3:42 pm

tool

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I'm sorry that things didn't turn out for you aspirin.. =/

good poem though..

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7A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Sun Jan 04, 2009 4:13 pm

aspirin

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I Just got here!

i don't write poetry very often at all.. but when i do, it's for a pretty imporant reason.. either to fool myself to stop thinking about that someone, or to help ease.. or to show happiness if the case may be. thanks everyone for your input =)

8A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Sun Jan 04, 2009 5:53 pm

boricua

boricua
Im here fairly often!

Crying or Very sad np man......... A clouded love 907386

9A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Sun Jan 04, 2009 10:35 pm

hydro

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I Just got here!

i got 99 problems but a bitch aint one 🏆



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10A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:03 pm

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you just called cynthia a bitch...idiot..

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11A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:42 am

FRoG

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aspirin wrote:i don't write poetry very often at all.. but when i do, it's for a pretty imporant reason.. either to fool myself to stop thinking about that someone, or to help ease.. or to show happiness if the case may be. thanks everyone for your input =)

hey, nice poem, I definetly understand where your coming here...

I tend to usually vent my feelings to paper when I have too much going on inside, wheather it be inside my heart or in my mind, you can only keep so much in there, so poetry has been my key to living more positively and poetry also helps us all understand how we are truthfully feeling. The reason I tend to write so much love poems is because I have been writing them from my heart, and I am in fact in love, but when I try to get a little more creative I'll let my mind wander, this allows for me to explore my imagination and from there some pretty neat pieces of work have been made.

A good friend told me before, "Always keep writing, when you think your done, you only really just begun."

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12A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:49 pm

Squ!rrel

Squ!rrel
I'm here way too much!

FRoG wrote: I am in fact in love


*gasp*

wit who? don't let me find her..i'm gonna kill that bitch!!!






I love you baby!! I love you

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13A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Mon Jan 05, 2009 2:24 pm

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I Just got here!

thanks frog, for sharing.. you're definitely a very creative and intelligent writer. wow squirrel+frog, you guys are pretty cute together lolz.

14A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Mon Jan 05, 2009 2:32 pm

Squ!rrel

Squ!rrel
I'm here way too much!

Very Happy i know... thanx

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15A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:49 pm

hydro

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I Just got here!

Tool wrote:you just called cynthia a bitch...idiot..

no i didn't, i was refering to myself on how i dont have a problem with girls.

16A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:20 pm

FRoG

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aspirin wrote:thanks frog, for sharing.. you're definitely a very creative and intelligent writer. wow squirrel+frog, you guys are pretty cute together lolz.

thank you, we are cute together, cause we are made for each other.
Like two puzzel pieces placed in the right way, completing this masterpiece we call life. <3

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17A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:22 pm

aspirin

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I Just got here!

my point exactly.. lol, man frog.. you're good with words. or maybe they just come easy for you, cause the heart tells you what to write.. cheater. =p

18A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:44 pm

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yea, its just comes natural to me, i do have it easy, but im thankful for this gift everyday, and to be able to share it with the world, is more a pleasure than anything, also we are all similar in our own ways, i feel as an a example people can learn from, as i go through my life it becomes more apparent to me.

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19A clouded love Empty Re: A clouded love Mon Jan 05, 2009 6:52 pm

Squ!rrel

Squ!rrel
I'm here way too much!

that's just god's plan. Very Happy He tells us what we are supposed to do. And Jake you are supposed to show the world how powerful words can be. not only do you show your love but you also tell it.

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