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Essay on most cherished object

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1Essay on most cherished object Empty Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 1:18 am

TheRustySpoon

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lawlz for english essay, i did my computers :p. Im writing this one big paragraph and i realized how importnat this ... game o.o has been to me. Anyhoo thought i'd share...
-_- wanted to write more but could not go over the word limit ugh
enjoy my bad english Razz

4th paragraph:

I love my computer and use it for a variety of purposes. But the most memorable part about my computer is not about the doing, it is not about completion of homework and projects, it is not about watching and laughing at funny videos and it is not about playing my favourite games. The most memorable part that I cherish about my computer is all the experiences that I have gained, all the life lessons I that I have learned and all the friendships that I have developed through my computer. At the end of a day, I do not think about how many points I had when playing my favourite game, Quake 3 Arena. Instead I think of all the friends that I have made playing a game that I enjoy, and I think of my clan mates in the game whom have since become like a second family to me. I think of the countless arguments, problems and discussions that I witnessed and sometimes took a part in, and how I have learned from it. In a simple computer game I have learned so much about forgiveness and giving second chances to people who made mistakes in the past, about how to handling responsibilities as a proud member of community. My computer reminds me of how one simple game has bonded different peoples of different ethnicity, of different age, of different gender, of different religion all together.

2Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 1:19 am

TheRustySpoon

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OPS spoted mistakes! good thing i read it over again just now o_o

3Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 1:23 am

TheRustySpoon

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UGH missed so many points >_>need to sleeeeeeeeeeep. english is so hard Sad

4Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:17 am

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I Just got here!

When teacher will read this, he/she will think you have no life Razz

5Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:25 am

Snipeja

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I Just got here!

Sounds good to me, good job. Don't forget to let us know how you scored.

6Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 11:30 am

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I bet your teacher will be posting to join *pWp* after reading that.

Razz

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7Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 11:34 am

W!feY

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lol awww i think its good! 👍

8Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 12:40 pm

FRoG

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nice Smile

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9Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 3:46 pm

scorpion

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lol , you can get your revenge in game!Laughing

10Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 4:17 pm

Alt!ma

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lol very true . good job i only spotted one error

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11Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 4:59 pm

beatles

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scorpion wrote:When teacher will read this, he/she will think you have no life Razz
lol i think its good. but he's right. you total nerd! jk its really great.

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12Essay on most cherished object Empty Re: Essay on most cherished object Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:20 pm

TheRustySpoon

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scorpion wrote:When teacher will read this, he/she will think you have no life Razz

The first graph sounded like i wanted to SEX UP MY COMPUTER ( no jokes) XD

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