The love of my life

this is my first poem that i made...like to learn from it

The love of my life

One night i was talking outside
There was a beautiful girl out there
I thought I would talk to her that night
We talked that whole night
She told me that she loves me
That night I feel in love with the right girl
We looked into each others eyes and grabbed each others hearts
Her eyes makes me feel special
Her voice makes me smile
Her personality makes me laugh
She is the perfect girl for me
Some guys might laugh and joke
Some might say congrats
She is the one
I love you always

Lovely, True feelings are rare these days, cherish them..

Sounds like it is coming from your heart. Very nice!

it is =D thanks mom and sync

Sync, always remember I love ya! (no homo -.-)