Stray

Stray
With no hope left inside
And without a warm place to stay
Circled in a trinity of bitterness
You have become a stray

When our paths crossed
You knew right then and there
That I would be the one
Whose life you want to share

The days we live between us
Are fierce and loved all the same
No matter what may happen
Not just one can take the blame

You notice a change in me
I notice when you try
I notice when you make a mess
And I’m there when you cry

I tell you I will always love you
I do mean what I say
True love does exist
From the example of two strays

Wow, this one really means alot to me, very inspirational, i definitely believe you have a really good way with words.

in my opinion this is your best yet, because it displays true love in a situation where life can be very distracting but you pull through the rough and remain willing to try, no matter what happens. good poem.

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I have absolutely no clue what to say...but I loveit!!

thanks everyone ^-^