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Can't believe I'm doing this...

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1Can't believe I'm doing this... Empty Can't believe I'm doing this... Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:25 am

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Well I was strumming along the forums here and I found this topic that I thought was pretty cool, but weird to have in a clan forum. Still, I got to thinking and decided to post a poem here I wrote a while back that was sort of inspired by something I experienced at my job. It's kind of sissy and i'm not sure why I'm doing it, probably the late night, last beer combination, but whatever, poke all the fun you want.

Courage
She kneels, unable to move
As she watches the warm red pour from him
She fights back the tears
But she cannot stop the brewing brim

Eventually the floodgates open
And out rushes the blue
When his heart is finally empty
She thinks what she sees can't be true

She holds her head up high
Resolution in her eye
She leaves him to rest peacefully
In a pool of purple

Not a lot of people get it, but if there are any fellow writers out there, they might appreciate it.

2Can't believe I'm doing this... Empty Re: Can't believe I'm doing this... Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:31 am

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I am pretty poor when it comes to reading comprehension which is why I rarely touch this section but what I got out of it was someone getting shot. I could be wrong.. in fact I know I am probably wrong but that what I got.

Also *pWp* is a very close clan. Some will say that this feels like a second family to them even though they don't know many of us personally. We all get along and like to have fun Smile

Neko has met quite a few people from *pWp* personally. Tad was the founder with his brother-in-law and his ex-wife, Rebbecca was a part of the clan as well. Tad's sister or cousin or what ever she is to him use to play here to. So it was founded on a family.

I think Tad has met quite a few of quaker's and I have met one, core/shadow or as I call him Jared.

Anyways that is a brief description of what *pWp* is and might give you a sense why we have a graphic and writers section.

3Can't believe I'm doing this... Empty Re: Can't believe I'm doing this... Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:39 am

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That was part of it, someone getting shot. And I'm glad to know the kind of clan I'm in. Hopefully I can be part of the closeness that the rest of you share someday.

4Can't believe I'm doing this... Empty Re: Can't believe I'm doing this... Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:52 am

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Reason I get that image is because of the video Ghetto Gospel by 2pac
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IxR4AweLeXE

5Can't believe I'm doing this... Empty Re: Can't believe I'm doing this... Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:15 am

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I see what you mean, that is the kind of image I was trying to show in a way.

6Can't believe I'm doing this... Empty Re: Can't believe I'm doing this... Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:23 am

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It's about a fish called Wanda.

http://www.myspace.com/kaylaandme

7Can't believe I'm doing this... Empty Re: Can't believe I'm doing this... Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:27 am

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Clip_ wrote:I see what you mean, that is the kind of image I was trying to show in a way.

Well than take that as a complement as I don't have a great comprehension.

8Can't believe I'm doing this... Empty Re: Can't believe I'm doing this... Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:45 am

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haha ok i will.

9Can't believe I'm doing this... Empty Re: Can't believe I'm doing this... Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:32 am

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Critically... that was choppy the 1st time I read it... I didn't get it at all.....

Then I read it a few more times and I could "see" it.

Very well done. I hope people like me that don't understand teh 1st go around take the time to read it again...

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10Can't believe I'm doing this... Empty Re: Can't believe I'm doing this... Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:42 am

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Thanks Smile

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