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The meaning is unclear
Where shadows and light come about
Whose words claim it right?
Surely not mine
Although my hands do write
The voices speak differently
Juxtapose and lose sight of what is true
Definition is just a proposition
To concur a purpose we seek
We are purely weak
Join others in finding fear
Finding reason
Finding definitions in the mirror
The brain evolves when exposed
To executed lyrics and it grows
Affliction to sane
Ecstasy to pain
To find sense in a rhyme
Is only wasting the beauty of it
The clear meaning of any speech
Is not to teach
But to learn
And overcome the holdings of ourselves



$10 to whoever gets it

is it about how powerless we are to our own minds and their capabilities?

like how the unconscious dominates the conscious?

nope

and here's a hint...I didn't say tell me what it's ABOUT..I said just to whoever gets it...


I love these complications I give

F U

cuz I GET it in the way I interpreted it, so HA!

but it's not getting the actual poem. It's only getting what you think you get the poem as...which in turn is actually one element of the poem, so you're on the right track

but im getting it in the way I interpret it so im right from my point of view

I know, that's basically what I said above...but now you're getting part of it


keep going

"The brain evolves when exposed," this is my favorite line...

Sometimes the truth hurts definitely when your apart of it and don't realize it, better yet when you don't accept it... when you are exposed of your flaws, it can very hard to accept, but in a good way it helps you understand yourself a little more, in turn you don't make the same mistakes twice, and you get a chance to take a step back and learn about how things truly appear in your life.

actually that line is connect with the line following "To executed lyrics and it grows".

My poem is about how people read lyrics or other poems and try to analyze a secret meaning or try to guess what the writer meant instead of just accepting the beauty of the words and the rhymes.

Tool wrote:actually that line is connect with the line following "To executed lyrics and it grows".

but of coarse it is, thats how they ryhmed so well, and i do understand where your coming from with this poem but "every line in a poem is actually a poem in itself", it really just depends on the reader and how it relates to them in their life. poetry is the "universal tool" to understand one's feelings and to draw in others who have once felt the same. good write

hehe..you said tool


but yes, what you're saying is also true. Just like numbers, poems can be broken down into fractions until there are so many meanings and justifications that it goes beyond levels of comprehension. But I like to keep the poetic beauty in line, so I don't tend to stray so far as that.


and thank you